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 Sandrine felt a weight lifted from her shoulders and moments later she was headed to her car. She had not more than fastened her seatbelt when her com screen flickered on. There had been another murder and she was called to the scene.
-Sandrine was working late at the precinct when the coroner's office called. She answered the phone, expecting to hear the latest on the case they were working on. But what the coroner told her left her reeling.
+Coroner states also pregnant, but no clues to tie them together say for the pregnancy test kit, from same manufacturer notices the detective, we'll give her a full screening later, the report should be on your desk tomorrow
-"We've just completed the autopsy on the latest victim," the coroner said. "And we've discovered something concerning. She was also pregnant."
-Sandrine's heart sank. This was the second victim in as many weeks, and the 4'th who had been pregnant, all cases with squeaky clean partners. It couldn't be a coincidence.
-"Did you run a test to determine the paternity?" she asked.
-"We did," the coroner replied. "And we were able to determine that the father was the victim's husband."
-Sandrine thought for a moment. "Do you happen to know which pregnancy test kit she used?" she asked.
-The coroner sounded surprised. "Actually, we do. She used a noninvasive blood sample and pregnancy test kit from a company called Verinata. It's a new technology that only requires a few drops of blood, and it's supposed to be very accurate."
-As soon as the coroner said the name, Sandrine's heart skipped a beat. Verinata was the same company that had manufactured the test kit found at Rosie Hunt's murder scene. And it was the same sh herself had used not so long ago.
-"Thank you for letting me know," Sandrine said, her voice shaking slightly. "We'll need to investigate this further."
-"We'll give you a full screening report tomorrow," the coroner said. "I'll make sure it's on your desk first thing in the morning."
-Sandrine hung up the phone, her mind racing. Two pregnant victims, both with a Verinata test kit. It was starting to look like more than a coincidence. She knew they needed to move quickly to catch the killer before there was another murder.
-Tuesday sucked just as bad Sandrine had just endured another round of torture at the precinct health offices,
 I know you hate these annual health checks and particularly the psyche evaluation, but I hope you understand that at this time it is especially important. The station psychologist/psychiatrist was talking and smiled.
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 Sandrine squirmed on the inside at the smile, she hated these sessions, the fakeness of the police world bothered her. everyone kept as much to themselves as they could, nobody wanted to bare themselves to the system. The make believe courtesy of the psychiatrist used to dealing with unthinkable trauma was in stark contrast to Sandrine's frank and open attitude. She's always been easy to smile and getting along with people. Nothing swept under the rug made her colleagues see her as a down to earth practical co-worker.
-Sandrine sat at her desk, going over the details of the case. The murder of the two pregnant women was weighing heavily on her mind, and she knew that time was running out to catch the killer.
+partner laughing afterwards, well they think u just might flip some day, all 3 victims had history of EuroCop Dectective knows this
-Her partner, Jack, walked over and sat down next to her. "What are you thinking, Sandrine?" he asked.
+Gives EuroCop Detective idea - check for markers in other victims and there's a bingo, the record shows all carry same genetic marker.
-"I'm thinking that we need to look into the other victims," she replied. "We need to see if they were pregnant, and if they had any genetic markers in common with the two women who were killed."
-Jack nodded in agreement. "That's a good idea. We should call the coroner's office and get them to run some tests."
+As there is another murder, there's still nothing to tie victims together say the marker, search widened to victims doctors and hospitals where they have been committed if commited, stil no pattern as all victims have not had expression in gene nor behaviour, hard to get evidence patient privacy.
-Sandrine picked up the phone and dialed the coroner's office. "Hi, it's Sandrine from the precinct. We need to run some tests on the other victims in the case. We need to know if they were pregnant and if they had any genetic markers in common with the two women who were killed."
+Partner spouts on way back from judge Coincidence - funny you share traits with your assailant, same marker a remark by an investigating detective.
-The coroner on the other end of the line was skeptical. "That's a lot of work," she said. "Are you sure it's worth it?"
+Searcing DB's for corrolating cases - Other murders, random and unconnected people but same type of people. Other countries,
-"I'm sure," Sandrine replied firmly. "We need to leave no stone unturned in this case."
-The coroner sighed. "Alright, I'll get my team on it. But it's going to take some time."
+EuroCop Detective comes home, speculating as nothing correlating except marker for schitzo
-Sandrine thanked her and hung up the phone. She turned to Jack. "It's going to take some time," she said. "But it's worth it. We need to find the common thread between these victims if we're going to catch the killer."
+EuroCop detective is attacked herself - saved by partner, who possibly dies
-Several days later, the results of the tests came back. Sandrine and Jack gathered around Sandrine's desk as she opened the file.
-"Let's see," she said, scanning the results. "No pregnancy for victim number one. No pregnancy for victim number two. No pregnancy for victim number three."
-She continued to read through the results, feeling her heart sink with each negative result. But then she got to victim number four.
-"Bingo," she said, her voice filled with excitement. "The record shows that victim number four was pregnant. And get this - all of the victims carry the same genetic marker."
-Jack's eyes widened in surprise. "That's a huge break in the case," he said. "We can use this information to track down the killer."
-Sandrine nodded. "We need to start looking for anyone who has access to this information. Someone who knows about the genetic marker and how to use it to target their victims."
-Sandrine sat at her desk, staring at the crime scene photos in front of her. Another victim, another murder. But this one was different she wasn't pregnant, probably just a fluke that she had been assigned to herself and Jack. There was still nothing to tie the victims together, except for the genetic marker they all shared. And as the search had widened to include the victims' doctors and hospitals, they were still no closer to finding a pattern.
-Sandrine's partner, Jack, walked over and sat down next to her. "What are you thinking, Sandrine?" he asked.
-"I'm thinking that we're at a dead end," she replied. "We've gone through all the victim's records, we've interviewed their doctors and hospital staff, but we still don't have anything to go on."
-Jack nodded in agreement. "It's frustrating, but we can't give up. We need to keep looking for any lead we can find."
-As they continued to brainstorm, Sandrine's phone rang. It was the coroner's office.
-"Sandrine, we've completed the autopsy on the latest victim," the coroner said. "And we've discovered something interesting. The victim also had that rare genetic disorder that was expressed in her genes."
-Sandrine's heart skipped a beat. "Can you tell me more about it?" she asked.
-I know we were not asked to test for it, but I just couldn't help it the MO was too similar, I mean could be a breakthrough if there is a connection"
-Are you sure you're not a detective Sandrine laughed. "I owe you one"
-"Yes Sandrine, yes you do!", the coroner replied.
-She thanked the coroner and hung up the phone. She turned to Jack. "I think we have something," she said.
-ack sat at his desk, going over the case files with a furrowed brow. He couldn't shake the feeling that they were missing something, some crucial detail that would tie everything together.
-As he looked up, he saw Sandrine standing in front of his desk, a concerned look on her face.
-"What's wrong?" he asked, putting down the papers.
-"It's just... this case," she replied, trailing off.
-Jack nodded in understanding. "I know, it's tough. But we'll get to the bottom of it, Sandrine. We always do."
-Sandrine smiled weakly, but her expression quickly turned to one of shock as Jack spoke again.
-"Hey, you know, it's funny," he said, a mischievous glint in his eye. "You share traits with your assailant. You have the same genetic marker."
-Sandrine's eyes widened in surprise, and she felt a pang of unease. She had told Jack once, during a moment of intimacy, about her genetic marker. But she had also emphasized that she had not gotten pregnant, despite their lack of protection.
-Jack seemed to sense her discomfort and quickly backtracked. "I mean, of course it doesn't mean anything. Just an interesting coincidence, that's all."
-Sandrine nodded, feeling relieved but also a little embarrassed. She and Jack had agreed to just stay partners, but she couldn't help but wonder if there was something more there.
-As she turned to leave, Jack couldn't help but steal a glance at her. He was still infatuated with her, even though they had agreed to just stay colleagues. But he knew that their work was more important than any romantic feelings he may have. So he turned back to the files, determined to find the missing piece of the puzzle that would solve the case once and for all.
-Jack and Sandrine sat in front of their computer screens, their eyes fixed on the data being displayed by the AI they had deployed. They had decided to try a new approach to the case, using artificial intelligence to analyze the data from various databases and find correlations that they might have missed.
-As they fed the data into the system, they watched as the AI began to highlight cases of other murders that shared similarities with their current case. They searched for random and unconnected people with the same genetic marker, even in other countries, and began to find a pattern emerging.
-They both sat back in their chairs, staring at the screen in disbelief. there was one global database where all the cases of the specific marker were being collected for research purposes. But what if the data they had received wasn't properly sanitized? What if the privacy protections had not been followed properly, or if someone had root access and was able to back-engineer through the whole system and discover victims that way?
-Their thoughts turned to the top researchers involved in finding a cure for the genetic disorder. Could it be one of them who was behind the murders? It seemed like a stretch, but they couldn't ignore the possibility.
-andrine stumbled through the door of her apartment, exhausted after a long day at work. She was looking forward to taking a hot shower and just relaxing for the rest of the night.
-But as she stepped inside, she was immediately attacked from behind. A hand covered her mouth, and she felt a sharp object press against her back in  the ensuing scuffle the glass coffee table in the living room was smashed to pieces. Sandrine was thrown onto the table, but she used some of her aikido training to turn the fight on its head.
-Just then, she heard a loud crash as the front door was kicked open. Jack had come by to check up on her, must have heard the scuffle, and came barging in weapon drawn.
-Sandrine take by surprise lost her grip and the assailant turned his attention to her partner and aimed his weapon and fired as Sandrine's partner lunged at him and knocked the gun out of his hand before he fell to the floor.
-For a moment, Sandrine frozeand, the assailant worried about other cops managed to break free and flee from the apartment.
-Sandrine was left standing in the wreckage of her living room, shaken battered and bruised. Her partner, however, lay on the ground, bleeding from a gunshot wound.
-She knelt beside him, tears streaming down her face. She had always been conflicted about their relationship, unsure if she should take the next step and commit to him fully. But as she looked at him now, she realized that she loved him more than anything.
-She stayed with him, holding his hand and whispering words of comfort until the paramedics arrived.
 ===== To the Next Level =====
-Sandrine sat in the Chief's office, her mind still reeling from the events of the night before. Her partner was going to pull through, but he was going to be in the hospital for a while.
+Back from hospital, everyone wondering from the absense of any evidence, as if some chemical cleansing done that has accelerated genetic breakdown of any evidence and no surveilance video
-The Chief spoke in a calm, even tone. "Sandrine, I'm taking you off the active duty roster. You'll do desk work until you're properly healed."
+take it easy, I am taking you off the xxxx case
-Sandrine couldn't believe it. "So, I'm just going to bumble around here doing nothing?"
+hell you are
-The Chief sighed. "You can take a leave of absence if you need to."
+etc.
-"Hell, I will," Sandrine said, standing up and throwing her hands in the air. "I'm not going to just sit around and do nothing. I need to find the person who did this."
+So I am just to bumble around here doing nothing ?
-The Chief raised an eyebrow. "I understand your frustration, Sandrine. But you need to take it easy. We can't afford to have you injured again."
+u can take leave of absense
-Sandrine nodded, resigned to her fate. But then the Chief continued. "However, there is something you can do. The policeman's ball is coming up, and an extremely rich person is going to show up. He's a famous researcher who owns a genetic research facility and test production facility."
-Sandrine's interest was piqued. "And what does this have to do with me?"
+Hell I will
-The Chief smiled. "I think it's an opportunity for you to sniff around and look for connections to your case while playing the good girl to the rest of the department."
+By chance invited to a policemans ball there se sees her assailant
-Sandrine nodded. "I see what you're getting at. I'll do it."
+Assailant is extremely rich person owning genetic research facility and test producer, thus assailant finds victims world wide. Determined to eradicate the genetic problem.
-The Chief smiled. "Good. I knew I could count on you. And Sandrine, I want you to know that we'll do everything we can to find the person who did this. But you need to take care of yourself first."
+Evt schitzo gen marker
+http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2009/02/090203145504.htm
+http://www.sciencedaily.com/releases/2007/01/070124120337.htm
-Sandrine left the Chief's office, a sense of purpose returning to her. She was going to find the killer, no matter what it took. And the policeman's ball was the perfect place to start.
+They meet - staring each other down
-Sandrine stood in front of her mirror, staring at her reflection in frustration. She had been trying to squeeze into a beautiful dress for the past half hour, but no matter how hard she tried, it just wouldn't fit.
+EuroCop asks about DNA business, assailant cant really escape as she's with some vip
-She tugged at the fabric, trying to stretch it over her curves. But it was no use. The dress was too small, and Sandrine felt uncomfortable playing dress up.
+smalltalk but in a way that it is clear to the both of them that they are fully aware who's who
-She sighed and slumped down on her bed, feeling defeated, she felt anything but glamorous.
+Heard u were attacked
-Her phone rang, and it was Jack. She hesitated for a moment before answering, unsure of what to say.
+I was, too bad the wireless cameras were jammed or we would have had a very clear picture of the assailant
-"Hey," she said, trying to sound cheerful.
+yeah too bad, it is unfortunate that people have no respect for law and order any more, if only such traits could be bred out of existence.
-"Hey, how are you holding up?" he asked, his voice strained.
+Excuse me I have to go to the toilet
-"I'm fine, you sound like shit," Sandrine said jokingly, trying to lighten the mood. "Is it hard to talk with a hole in you?"
+EuroCop goes out to barf.
-Jack coughed and let out a small laugh. "Yeah, it is. But I wanted to check on you. How are you doing?"
-"I'm okay," Sandrine said, feeling a sense of comfort in talking to Jack. "Just having some trouble with this dress."
-There was a moment of silence before Jack spoke again, his voice serious. "Sandrine, I want you to know that I'm here for you, no matter what. And I know you'll do a great job tonight."
-Sandrine felt a lump form in her throat. "Thanks, Jack. I really appreciate it."
-They talked for a few more minutes, and then Jack hung up. Sandrine looked at herself in the mirror again, taking a deep breath. Maybe the dress didn't fit, but that didn't mean she couldn't do some kick-ass police work.
-Sandrine arrived at the Policeman's Ball in her Kinetica, while a sleek and modern car that turned heads on the street it seemed somewhat out of place among the limosines pulling up outside the venue.
-She took in the view. The exterior of the building was grand, with large pillars and intricate architecture that added to the elegance of the event.
-As she stopped her car, a valet rushed over to help her. He opened the door for her and extended his hand to help her out, and as she stood up, "don't worry, it's self parking" Sandrine said with a smile to the valet.
-"Welcome Mam", the valet answered politely as the car beeped and then smoothly drove itself into the nearby parking basement.
-Sandrine straightened out her dress and made her way towards the entrance. There was a red carpet laid out for the attendees to walk on, and she felt a sense of excitement as she made her way down it.
-Before she could enter the building, however, she had to go through the security check. The security guards were thorough but efficient probably ex cops, and she was quickly cleared to enter.
-Inside the lobby, she saw the Chief, who greeted her with a warm smile. "Thank God save me", he grinned. They made small talk for a few minutes, discussing the event and the guests who were arriving.
-The lobby was filled with the sound of chatter and laughter as people mingled and caught up with old friends.
-Sandrine saw some familiar faces from the force and others who were new to her. She felt a little out of place in her dress.
-As she made her way through the lobby, she heard snippets of conversation about the latest case. It seemed like everyone was talking about it, speculating on who the perpetrator might be and what their motive could be.
-Sandrine made a mental note to keep her ears open, hoping that she might catch a clue that could help her in her investigation. She smiled and made her way deeper into the event, ready to enjoy the night and do some undercover detective work at the same time.
-Then she looked up and saw him standing across the room, staring back at her. She had been searching for the assailant, trying to find any clue that might lead her to him, and now, here he was.
-They locked eyes, both knowing exactly who the other was. The assailant made his way over to her, and Sandrine tried to play it cool.
-"Nice to see you again," he said, his voice dripping with sarcasm.
-"What do you mean?" Sandrine asked, trying to sound tough.
-"Oh Just making small talk, isn't that what people do at these events" the assailant replied. "Heard you were attacked. Must suck you being a cop and all"
-Sandrine didn't want to give him the satisfaction of knowing how much the attack had affected her, so she shrugged it off.
-"I'm fine," she said, trying to belittle him. "It takes more than some puny criminal like that to keep me down."
-The assailant enjoyed this and continued taunting her.
-"I heard all the electronic surveilance went down when it happened. If only the wireless cameras weren't jammed, they could have had a clear picture of the attacker."
-Sandrine gritted her teeth, trying to keep her cool.
-"Yeah, too bad," she said through clenched teeth. "If only people had some respect for law and order these days."
-The assailant nodded in agreement, mentioning how his brother the "Rock Star" Researcher was working hard to breed out such traits. Sandrine felt sick to her stomach, realizing that the assailant's brother was likely the famous genetic researcher they had been looking for, he was the connection.
-She needed to get out of there, and fast before she took him down right here and causing a scene, this creep had connections and money beyond imagination, that meant laywers and wiggling she could not handle without rock solid proof, her place had been devoid of any genetic evidence it was almost as if the techs coukd have been paid off to not find anything.
-"Excuse me, I have to go to the toilet," she said, making her way out of the room.
-Once outside, she leaned against the wall, feeling physically ill. She punched the wall regreting it instantly. She couldn't believe that the assailant had been right in front of her, and she had been unable to do anything about it.
-As she made her way back to the party, she saw the assailant slip away into the crowd. Sandrine was fuming with anger, knowing that he had slipped away once again. She couldn't let him get away with this.
-The rest of the event was an agony to go through, hearing about the fantastic research being done and how lives were being transformed. Seeing her fellow blues getting medals pinned to their chest while she knew there was an assailant and probable murderer free in the crowd.
+Assailant uses the opportunity to slip away from party
+EuroCop fuming with anger also leaves the party
 At the hospital talking to partner
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 EuroCop presents her evidence to assailant at some place she has chosen
-he flees as he understands game is up
-death defying motorcycle chase on a construction yard, brother of researcher is a construction mogul
-after assailant is brought down by eurocop making stuff fall inn front of him by flying through air on motorcycle and shooting her gun felling assailant from his bike
 EuroCop half dead when cops arrive

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